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my girlfiend stabbed me
Contributed by
krisseee
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:46:14 PM in AEST
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don't know why i didn't learn
i wish that i wished that you would burn
but i can't hate you, god knows i'm trying
although ***** you, you won't reduce me to crying
i gave you everything i could, and a little more
but ***** it if you think that i'll continue to be your whore
Game Over
Copyright ©
krisseee
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2004-05-30 12:46:14]
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Re: my girlfiend stabbed me
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:49:27 PM AEST
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| strong words from a powerful mind. nicely put! |
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Re: my girlfiend stabbed me
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by Brians_Sweety on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:02:16 PM AEST
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Like said in a previouse comment powerful words. This has a powerful meaning also. But what I like the most is Game Over! Nice ending very well put
Stephanie |
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Re: my girlfiend stabbed me
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by Broken-glass on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:34:14 PM AEST
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| This is great, I love the last two lines. I felt your words, best thing I've read in a while. Broken-glass |
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