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The Rain Never Ends
Contributed by
Rage
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Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 12:00:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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Endlessly wandering,
Through the days of woe.
Forever lost,
In the shower of tears aglow.
Vision a blur,
From the pain that strikes the eyes.
Breathing heavily,
It hurts too much to cry.
Forbidding clouds,
Has covered the rays of my sun.
Blanketed with gray,
The rays of hope are gone.
The drizzle of yesterday,
Still lingers from the past.
The arching colors of tomorrow,
Has been smothered at last.
Forever roaming,
The nights when solitude attends.
Still pushing onward,
...The rain never ends...
~*~
Copyright ©
Rage
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2002-10-12 12:00:00]
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Re: The Rain Never Ends
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 08:27:45 PM AEST
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Hey, cool, you're writing poems again. ^_^ Hmmm, was this poem about anything in particular, or did you just wanna write something sad? You don't have to answer that, but I was just wondering. Anywho, it's cool to see you writing poems again, Grace. Laterz.
\~~~Ronnie~~~/// |
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Re: The Rain Never Ends
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 17th October 2002 @ 08:29:22 PM AEST
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Gah... just noticed the "just outta the blue" thing. x_o I guess that answers my question, heh. D'oh!
\~~~Ronnie~~~/// |
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Re: The Rain Never Ends
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by OreO on
Friday, 8th November 2002 @ 03:03:29 AM AEST
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Beautifully written!!!
This was absolutely beautiful
it's full of reality and very
heartfelt, your talent shines
through your poetry
Thanks for sharing i really
enjoyed reading this
Keep em' coming
.::´¯`·..· OreO·..·´¯`::.
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Re: The Rain Never Ends
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by Baby_Blu-XTC on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 02:14:02 AM AEST
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| Very nicely written.I really enjoyed reading this. |
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Re: The Rain Never Ends
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 21st November 2002 @ 12:48:02 PM AEST
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Rage, it's great to see you again!!!! I've missed you, grrl... Your poems are not erased..they are still at the old site... but you can start re-posting again..will show the new poets here the great talent we had here.. Welcome back... This is a lovely poem.. as yours always are...
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Re: The Rain Never Ends
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by Eternal_Dreamer on
Saturday, 27th September 2008 @ 02:16:53 PM AEST
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Rage~
This is so heartfelt & sad my friend.
Gosh you brought flash backs of my
past with this write. I felt your pain,
your loss of hope and a spiraling into
a deep dark place. The rain does end
my friend and not all is gone & lost.
I know this is an earlier write. I hope
you are long past this place now.
A deep and touching write.
huge heartfelt huggers
dreamer
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