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Contributed by
rhei76
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:21:30 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Sometimes
I get an urge
To put a bullet thru my hand,
My shoulder
Just to feel the pain
The only thing I understand
Needles work
But not the same
INK drys
PIERCING close
In a day
I feel no change
It sucks how emotions are all inside
And no one can feel my rain
I write day in
Day out
Trying to relay the shame
All the way up into my brain
With the lack there of chemicals that blame
It's not my fault
I'm not so saine
Maybe tomorrow I can feel the pain
ARH--Huh
Cutting tools don't please the psyche
I need a bullet
All praised in silver
Sunken thru flesh
Lossing speed with the rain
I hate it when I get this way
But something has to feel okay
This love
This hate
Emotions overrate
Give me a knife
But that's to late
Give me a bullet
That's the fate
So I can assure
I'm okay
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rhei76
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2004-05-30 12:21:30]
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Re: bullet
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:41:29 PM AEST
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very dark and emotional,
very well written tho,
pixie xx |
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Re: bullet
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by deathdrop on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:46:40 PM AEST
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its sad that you feel this way, but i can emagine how you feel though, or atleast i think i can.
this is a great poem. don't let your talent go to waste! |
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