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Burrowed Hatred
Contributed by
fireyredhairedfeminist
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 11:50:01 AM in AEST
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Alas, the hatred that rests so visibly upon my furrowed brow, in its ever so innocent form of a cold sweat, drawn from my skin by a nightmare that was once my hollow reality,
this drop of sweat, drops from my brow unto a gash in my flesh and buries itself deep inside, as if to spite my mere mortal existence, my father, if he wishes to name himself of that description, enters the boundry of my room, my very chamber of privacy and protection, and smyts me with his red raised hands of destain, and destroys my soul again for another day, i die inside, i die.......
as the piper played for the rats,
........god plays for me...
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Re: Burrowed Hatred
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by Jackee_line on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:14:34 PM AEST
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| Well done , very dark, and well written |
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Re: Burrowed Hatred
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 20th November 2006 @ 05:43:57 AM AEST
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| this was a good poem! The imagery was so realistic. Good Job! |
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