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Porcelain
Contributed by
TeenageEmoGirl
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:16:45 AM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She's porcelain
How easily she breaks
So she's avoided
And put away
Admire her beauty, its true
But they don't have a clue
Remarking her beauty
Yet citing her every flaw
Looking at her lifeless eyes
And wondering what she saw
She'd give it all up
Because while porcelain is revered
Lifeless eyes begin to tear
Because porcelain isnt embraced
On some elevated shelf placed
To keep out of the way
She'd give it all up, it's true
If only, if only they knew
She wishes every night
Upon a damned star in the sky
That she'd be the old rag doll
Instead of porcelain up high
With great envy of the ragdoll
She trembles and she shakes
Forgotten and unloved
She falls softly and breaks
And she couldn't be revived
No matter how hard the paramedics tried
If only someone cared
Before she broke apart inside.
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TeenageEmoGirl
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2004-05-30 09:16:45]
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Re: Porcelain
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:18:06 AM AEST
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This is so sad, but very well written,
takecare,
pixie xx |
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Re: Porcelain
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by lostinmyself on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:37:30 AM AEST
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this is sad, and very beautiful.
i can relate. great write..
*hugs* phil xxx |
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Re: Porcelain
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by screwup on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 10:52:27 AM AEST
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I've read your work before, and I think this poem is great. I can really relate to this one big time...sadly so many can. keep writing and keep your head up high. I would love to read more.
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Re: Porcelain
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by BloodyTears5 on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 12:55:49 PM AEST
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| sad but brill. Keep up the good work. |
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Re: Porcelain
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 06:05:07 PM AEST
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wow very emotional I'm not sure what to say except I loved this and I hope you do not feel this way.
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Re: Porcelain
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by diamond_tears on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 06:51:02 PM AEST
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| great poem... keep writing!! |
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Re: Porcelain
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by brigitte7735 on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 11:41:09 PM AEST
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Really beautiful and relatable
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Re: Porcelain
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by InnerBeautyQueen on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 12:31:10 AM AEST
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| i love this. it's absolutely brilliant. and it's so true... deeply true. It made my breath stop. |
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