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Fantasy
Contributed by
Luinil
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:06:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Ripped back to actuality
My serene dream fades from memory
A glimpse into a life once lived
A peaceful harmony never to be found again
An orange globe crawls slowly across the horizon
Bathing the trees in light, warming rolling hills
Gentle wind kisses stone on the great wall
Mist slowly lifts above the castle’s highest window
Tin whistle sings Beltane’s promise of light
I wait for you by the tree
Clouds gather in the west, waiting
Peace flows through my veins and the tree
Ripped again into waking
Another day my heart is broken
I waited then, I’ll wait now
Until I melt into peaceful delusion
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Luinil
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2004-05-30 08:06:01]
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Re: Fantasy
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:32:54 AM AEST
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yes, we're are all the same...different in so many ways and yet, wanting our own peace. A really lovely write.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Fantasy
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:36:32 AM AEST
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| I really like the way you write of love. With the resignation that at least with you, it will remain..Refreshing and I enjoyed it very much...Russ |
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Re: Fantasy
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 07:21:33 PM AEST
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This is lovely. I have to look for more of your work. I am very impressed.
Rita |
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