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SWEET LUVIN
Contributed by
emystar
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Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 07:25:13 AM in AEST
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~Sigs by Dale~
Put your head
on my shoulder
fall into my
aching arms
lean on luv
to shelter from storms.
Let me show
U sweet luvin
peace from pain
sweet, sweet luvin
to lean on
so much kissin-n-hugin
sweet, sweet luvin.
Rock our cradle
of luv free
on past agony
torture behind
luv's rainbow
bringing rest, yours, mine.
Rejuvanating for luv
on life's journey
we'll fly free
casting healing power
past gone
a little luv in showers.
Copyright ©
emystar
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Re: SWEET LUVIN
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by Archie on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 07:28:17 AM AEST
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| Nice poem, The picture did not show up though |
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 07:32:18 AM AEST
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very nice. one could almost feel the caresses.
thanks for sharing
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 07:32:51 AM AEST
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Awwww this is so sweet, great job :O)
pixie xx |
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Re: SWEET LUVIN
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by Lone_er on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:39:50 AM AEST
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| A lovely poem filled with wisdom emmy. Enjoyed it very much...Russ |
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by reprobate on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 09:20:29 AM AEST
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the pic is just right! now, i'm going to have to paint something like it. it really stirs the emotions!!!
thank you |
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Re: SWEET LUVIN
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by JennyFruFru on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 11:15:50 AM AEST
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| oh i like this emy its so sweet and pleasant. the music scared the crap out of me at first... haha wasnt expecting it ... i was like woah what's that as it was loading ... haha ... love ya girlie :) :) :) take care ! |
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Re: SWEET LUVIN
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 01:01:54 PM AEST
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beautiful emy!! sooo sweet:) hugs n' love, nessa
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Re: SWEET LUVIN
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 04:22:15 PM AEST
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Sweet Little Emy, everything you touch can feel your love very much.....even your pen of poetry.
This one was so touching to me.....it reveals what you truly have in your heart.......and that is love, and love showers especially for those that you love.
The picture was so splendid, and the accompanying music just topped it off!
Very fine work indeed!
love
consue
mom |
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Re: SWEET LUVIN
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 07:25:53 PM AEST
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Emy, this is so beautiful. I know it will mean a lot to him. Your muse had to be elated with the beauty of this special one.
Rita |
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Re: SWEET LUVIN
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by secretwind on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 05:19:53 AM AEST
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| OOOH this is so sweet and sensual.it is giving me chills up and down my spine.....U R THE BEST!!!! |
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by peixoto on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 11:39:12 AM AEST
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| Beautiful poetry. Thanks a lot for sharing suc a nice words. |
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Re: SWEET LUVIN
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by AnGeL_M on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 01:14:27 PM AEST
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Lovely & Very Sweet Emy I Liked It Alot Thanks For Sharing !!!
Love,Hugs & God Bless
LoVe - AnGeL |
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Re: SWEET LUVIN
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by Rhei76 on
Wednesday, 2nd June 2004 @ 08:59:24 PM AEST
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| Nicely written, sweet and sound |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 12:26:06 AM AEST
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I wasn't expecting that! (the music) i thought the voices had come back!
Seriously though i really enjoyed the complete package,( music, picture and poem) good work once again.
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 01:28:01 AM AEST
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This is wonderful...Beautiful and so sweet and the picture is quite inspiring. Thanks for the read :o)
Hugs 'n Love
- Becca |
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by bernard on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 10:25:53 AM AEST
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Beautiful love poem and the pictures and music gave it that extra flair.
bernard |
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 11:15:08 PM AEST
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WHAT A NICE WRITE! MUST COME FROM YOUR HEART SO DEEP INSIDE!! YOU WRITE THE WORDS AS THEY'RE HEARD RIGHT B~4 OUR VERY EYES!!! LOVED IT ALOT EMY!!!!
LOL-DAN!!!!! |
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by blueheart on
Friday, 4th June 2004 @ 04:03:40 AM AEST
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Aww...this is so sweet.
Such an enjoyable read. |
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Re: SWEET LUVIN
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 02:19:58 AM AEST
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| There is love in everything you do,another beautiful flow from the master....Well done. |
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 5th June 2004 @ 04:23:20 AM AEST
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Well it soothed me and I was only reading the words !!
Nice work.....thx
steve |
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Re: SWEET LUVIN
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by Jenni_K on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 01:28:06 AM AEST
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Ohh La La......lovely write, grrlfriend.....
Hugs
Jenni |
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by uchendu on
Monday, 7th June 2004 @ 11:11:22 AM AEST
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| gOOD WORK. YOU NEVER CEASE TO AMAZE ME WITH YOUR WORDS. LOVELY ONE HERE. |
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by deadreckoning1983 on
Thursday, 19th August 2004 @ 03:28:25 PM AEST
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| this was soooooo sweet. i couldn't stop smiling |
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by critterhideaway on
Tuesday, 7th September 2004 @ 05:24:18 AM AEST
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| How nice, loved it and the picture is fantastic as well as the music. |
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Re: SWEET LUVIN
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by Essentially9 on
Tuesday, 4th January 2005 @ 10:11:18 PM AEST
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| i wish this was longer =] |
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