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Murderous Silence
Contributed by
essentially9
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Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 10:31:19 PM in AEST
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Murderous Silence
I cannot stand this anymore
The silence of the world
The tears that have come forth
They are the only hint
At what occurs within
Everything else under the surface
I hide behind a facade
That can be easily broken down
Misunderstood for everything
Yet accepted as a mistake
This is the life I lead
I would gladly give it back
My world is complete silence
Except for the voices in my head
Yet they too are silencing
I've given up everything
Or its left me on its way
Silence is a killer
When the answer never given
Is the only thing to save you
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essentially9
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2004-05-29 22:31:19]
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Re: Murderous Silence
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by Archie on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 10:50:44 PM AEST
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Communication is the answer.
"Words can break down a wall
heal a broken heart
help a failure to try again
lift the downcast spirit
and cure the ill of the soul" |
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Re: Murderous Silence
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by Avarice_Riot on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 11:51:48 PM AEST
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| I was very moved by this piece, you've done a great job conveying your pessimistic and feeling hopeless emotions here. |
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Re: Murderous Silence
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by bobotheclown on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 05:47:16 PM AEST
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wow this was amazing the pain and honesty really hit me.
Bobo (Joel) |
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Re: Murderous Silence
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by afterdark on
Sunday, 30th January 2005 @ 06:17:54 PM AEST
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| Silence why is it we are so afraid of it..Why are so many people so upset by it..What can it do to us..Your last stanza was so perfect..What else is new..I think that if you and I were in the same room..Then yes silence would be the killer. |
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