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Driving Storm
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:34:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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Four hundred miles
On three hours of sleep
I’m running from, running to
Thoughts reaching deep
Miles drop away
Uncontrollable tears come
Raindrops on the windshield
I’ve come undone
Without destination
I cross the dark of night
Thunder inside and overhead
Dawn is out of sight
Unforgiving miles
Stretching out before me
Lightening crashes inside out
I glimpse reality
Four hundred miles
And I’ve only just begun
I won’t be coming home until
The clouds are done
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Silent-No-More
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2004-05-29 20:34:34]
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Re: Driving Storm
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:40:20 PM AEST
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| great write...expressed well. loved it alot. |
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Re: Driving Storm
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by kayald on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:44:37 PM AEST
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| wow. this is really powerful. i am amazed how u put so much into so few words....really cool....-Kay |
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Re: Driving Storm
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by secretwind on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:11:46 PM AEST
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| vision come forth as i read this,well written. |
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Re: Driving Storm
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by reprobate on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:15:10 PM AEST
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we all have that problem...running to, running from. good write.
thanks for sharing |
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Re: Driving Storm
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:22:06 PM AEST
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| hmmm how does one say brilliant without over flatering? this is wonderful writing. I agree so much expessed with so little said. and you know thats how I like em. as always great poem! |
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Re: Driving Storm
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 10:42:39 PM AEST
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beautifully expressed feelings and brilliant images:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Driving Storm
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:42:57 AM AEST
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This is expressed expertly 5/5
takecare
pixie xx |
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