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''The Girl Who Cried Wolf''
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 07:52:49 PM in AEST
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Stop playing with me
Be serious I need you
Can’t you tell?
Stop laughing at me as I’m bleeding
Lying on the bed blood dripping from my lip
Can’t you tell I’m in pain?
Bleeding internally
Facing my fear of being alive
I want to stay
But I need your help
Be serious
This time I’m not kidding
It’s really happening
Call the paramedics
These pills are killing me
Hurry before I’m gone
I want to live this time
Don’t let me go!
I beg you please this isn’t an act!
Copyright ©
pyrofungus
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2004-05-29 19:52:49]
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Re: ''The Girl Who Cried Wolf''
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by shelby on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:07:41 PM AEST
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wow this is intense
michelle |
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Re: ''The Girl Who Cried Wolf''
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by purplestary on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:42:28 PM AEST
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| verry intense!! |
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Re: ''The Girl Who Cried Wolf''
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by pixie on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:44:18 AM AEST
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wow, such a great write,,, powerful from start to finish.
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Re: ''The Girl Who Cried Wolf''
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 05:17:22 PM AEST
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vividly desperate, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: ''The Girl Who Cried Wolf''
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by BloodyTears5 on
Sunday, 21st August 2005 @ 08:57:41 AM AEST
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| i like it. lots of emotions are in there. loved how you used the story as your title and kinda played it in. Keep up the good work |
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