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Take Me Back (In Time)
Contributed by
msnider
on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:49:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
Nostalgic
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Much has changed
Since I was young
When days were long
And time would last
Eternally.
Take me back
To summer days
To child's lives
And child's ways.
Give me youth
And set me free.
My troubled mind
Endanger's me.
Now time runs short
It's brief struggle
Leaves me lying
On my back -
Alone.
Take me back
Where I can run
Light and carefree
In the sun.
And let its rays
Pour warmth in me.
This empty heart
Is withering.
Now without knowing
What's to come
I will live and time will leave
And I will shed a tear for each past
Memory.
Take me back
To school field trips
To bumper cars
And kool-aid lips.
And peel awake
These tear worn eyes
For deep inside
A child lies.
Please hold me close
I ache with fear
Of leaving things
I deem so dear.
If only I
Could press rewind
And find the time
I've left behind.
Copyright ©
msnider
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2004-05-29 14:49:29]
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Re: Take Me Back (In Time)
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by Vermillion on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:00:21 PM AEST
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now that is one excellent poem. it so takes me back to when i was a child and how i miss my old friends. you had excellent rythem,excellent flow, just a wonderul poem.
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Re: Take Me Back (In Time)
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by PumpkinPie on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:07:49 PM AEST
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Very heartfelt poem you got there...I enjoyed reading it finding pieces of how I feel throughout the write.Just remember that the present has yet many more memories for the futur days to fall back on but that's what makes life so beautiful...God bless,
PumpkinPie
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Re: Take Me Back (In Time)
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:10:17 PM AEST
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This is wonderfully nostalgic and excellently crafted. Kool-aid lips. Oh... you got me!
I really enjoyed this. Fabulous! |
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Re: Take Me Back (In Time)
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:19:23 PM AEST
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I concur. This poem is beautiful and it has a wonderfully flowing rhythm about it.
Bravo and encore.
Love,
chelsea |
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Re: Take Me Back (In Time)
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:22:17 PM AEST
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This is truly an awesome poem... It flowed beautifully and captured the emotions quite well... It created stirrings within me making me wish to also revisit the past. Thank you for sharing it..
Jenni |
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Re: Take Me Back (In Time)
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by Essentially9 on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 10:12:50 PM AEST
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brilliant write. ive felt this many times.
If only I
Could press rewind
And find the time
I've left behind. |
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