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Twisted Love Trilogy

Contributed by Vermillion on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:14:50 PM in AEST
Topic: DarkPoetry



waiting for my angel

she is among Gods most beautiful faces
she belongs in his glory the most heavenly place
i do not belong in her presence, worthy not am i
her perfection is too radiant for this ground and sky
i want to be her angel a holy guide to the lords house
show her the light of his kingdom, tho im a lowly mouse
so i pray for the strength and wisdom to take her home
home, a place for her to shine bright and never be alone
i want to set her free, free of this world, free of wicked ways
free to speak her mind,free to spread her wings and fly away
she will be so thankful maybe she will even hug me or perhaps love me
im tired of waiting God gave me the power i can do this trust me
so i set her free i came like a thief in the night
i set her free she embraced Gods light
society arrested me locked me up and threw away the key
accused of manslaughter, murder in the first degree
sitting behind these bars waiting for my angel to set me free

In The Dark

i hear bells ringing,spirits singing, could it be love?
see her smile,like a child, its what ive dreamed of
on the telephone, shes all alone,full moon-midnight blue
first she laughs,then she gasps, whos she talkin to?
i make up a name to pass the blame, to the other end of the line
then she hangs up,fills her cup, with some devils cherry wine
she likes to drink,at least i think,perhaps her mommy does too
she lies in bed,turns her head, starts screaming aloud
she sees my eyes, now its bedtime,sleep tight dont make a sound
if you yell were going to hell,the daddy opens the door
he shoots me dead,lying in her bed,i guess my love is no more

behind the bushes, my beating heart
outside your window, im in the dark





Copyright © Vermillion ... [ 2004-05-29 13:14:50]
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Re: Twisted Love Trilogy (User Rating: 1 )
by Overstated on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 07:11:09 PM AEST
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this should recieve more reads than it currently has!!! this is a top write well done!! really liked in the dark..


Re: Twisted Love Trilogy (User Rating: 1 )
by Vermillion on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 07:57:20 PM AEST
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i hate commenting on a poem i wrote but id like to point out because of the edit done by the moderators they took out an entire section of my poem. cant say i blame em.please let me know if you wanna read this our any of my poems im unallowed to post.
~vermillion~


Re: Twisted Love Trilogy (User Rating: 1 )
by brigitte7735 on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 11:28:50 PM AEST
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god you freak me out sometimes, i freaking love it!!

Vanessa


Re: Twisted Love Trilogy (User Rating: 1 )
by shorty_52 on Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 06:24:44 PM AEST
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this is very good! words can't describe it. good job, keep up the good work. the things u write in ur poetry can really make u think.
~allyson~


Re: Twisted Love Trilogy (User Rating: 1 )
by freespirit on Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 09:21:18 AM AEST
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Great poem you have a way with words
I enjoy reading your work
God bless


Re: Twisted Love Trilogy (User Rating: 1 )
by deadbloodyrose on Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 03:46:07 PM AEST
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i love your poems.. and i would love if u would send me your poems that they've edited out... AMI JO


Re: Twisted Love Trilogy (User Rating: 1 )
by assassinatorgirl on Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 07:06:49 PM AEST
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the first one was my favorite, i could feel the love radiating out. awesome poem.




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