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Don't Touch Me!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 11:24:14 AM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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I got a pain that’s unbearable,
Some thing that makes me sad.
All I wanted was for you to love me,
Not HIT!! Me so I’d turn bad!!
I can’t forgive you,
From what you used to do,
I can’t love you again,
From what you put me through!!
Sure I can say hello,
And look you in the eyes,
But If you p*ssed me off again!
I’d punch you until you die!!
So am I p*ssing you off!!
Then come on, bring it on!!
Smack, hit and thump me!
All day long!!
GO ON THREATEN ME!!
GO SLAP’N’ HIT!!
BUT IF YOU LAY ONE FINGER ON ME!!
THEN I WON’T STOP MY FIST!!
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deathdrop
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2004-05-29 11:24:14]
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Re: Don't Touch Me!
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by Brians_Sweety on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 11:50:09 AM AEST
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OH my goodness, That was an awesome poem. It was like I felt everything you felt. AWESOME WRITE. I know how you feel also I have been there and done that. Well besides the whole fighting thing lol. I have wanted to beat the living life out of someone many times though. Thank you for sharing! It was awesome and entertaining.
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Re: Don't Touch Me!
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by lovingcritters on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 04:02:10 PM AEST
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I'm so glad you are able to vent, that is so good for you. Forgive them for if you don't you will be their slave for the rest of your days. That means they will still be able to manipulate you emotionally. But have nothing to do with them........why go back for hurt after hurt!!! Doesn't make sense.
This was a very talented poem.......keep them coming.......your pen can be your best friend.
Love you
consue
P.S. You will never forget, never ever. It's been 67 years for me, and I can still it very vividly! And feel it in my heart also. |
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