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A Marionette
Contributed by
reprobate
on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 11:06:13 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Soulless pain coursing through my veins
Blanketing thought against rationality
Stinging salt crusts out vision
A bitter song of two and one making one
What are the costs, really, how much
When everything has been given
Only to find that nothing is left
It's all good, so you say
The echoes of goodbye footsteps
Cut through me like lightning in the dark
Dreams now become as hollow as shadows
As ruptured shards of our life clatter and crash
Shackled with useless, lingering hope
Misbegotten faith seems like disease
A puppet to these sardonic feelings
I'm just strung up to be drug around
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reprobate
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2004-05-29 11:06:13]
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Re: A Marionette
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 12:47:10 PM AEST
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I have never felt like anyones puppet, but I sure have felt like a puppet for life's needs. Your scribbles are very meaningful, my friend.
Rita |
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Re: A Marionette
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by liquidsunshine on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:41:37 PM AEST
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However negative the feelings are/were, the poem is positively splendid.
Bravo and encore!!
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: A Marionette
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by Essentially9 on
Friday, 9th July 2004 @ 11:37:14 PM AEST
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| i can relate to some of this sadly. good write. |
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Re: A Marionette
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by assassinatorgirl on
Thursday, 2nd December 2004 @ 09:12:05 PM AEST
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great job ^_^!!! loved it! really nice flow and i could visualize it well. awesome!
cizo |
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