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Just So You Know
Contributed by
Silent-No-More
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Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 10:47:08 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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I didn’t miss what you said
I’m not that dumb, I’m not that dead
Inside
I asked you to explain it again
You stammered and twisted it then
You lied
I desperately wanted to let it go
But it hung on, clung on, even though
I tried
It ate at me, biting hard at night
I was only a fool to even think it might
Be denied
I just couldn’t trust you anymore
Insistent that I would not put you before
My pride
No, I didn’t miss what you said
And that moment as we lied there in bed
It died
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Silent-No-More
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2004-05-29 10:47:08]
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Re: Just So You Know
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by mountainhigh on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 11:06:51 AM AEST
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Nothing worse than a liar, especially one who lies about love. Time does help, but the pain lives on too.
I wish the best for you, thanks for sharing this.
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Re: Just So You Know
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 12:04:42 PM AEST
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this poem is excellent, beautifully sad, and really hits home with me as i was treated the same way 5 months ago, my heart goes out to you, hang in there, and *heres to newfound happiness and love* hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Just So You Know
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by Brians_Sweety on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 12:42:24 PM AEST
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Great Poem! Well written, laid out, and even more well said. I admire you techinique. This was awesome it got you point across yet you didn't have to say to much to where it would hurt you all over again. Thank you for sharing these very beautifully written words and I look forward to many more in the future!
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Re: Just So You Know
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by holderofthestone on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:22:58 PM AEST
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| I like i like! when your lies to its hard to build the trust back up. its burns through to your soul. you have a great poem here. creative |
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Re: Just So You Know
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 03:30:11 PM AEST
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I love the flow of this and the message it gets across.We can all relate to this one, that's for sure.
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Just So You Know
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by Elena on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 05:08:49 PM AEST
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This is very good, pain-inducing perhaps, but very good.
E |
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Re: Just So You Know
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by windowguy on
Tuesday, 26th May 2009 @ 08:54:46 AM AEST
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| Sad story. What I really like about it is the format, so difficult to do, well crafted and appealing to the eye .Good choice of words too. |
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