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MINNEAPOLIS MURDER
Contributed by
YoungArra
on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 10:41:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
Grief
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IVE BEEN THROUGH A LOT OF STRESS TODAY BECAUSE THIS KID THAT I KNEW JUST PASSED AWAY
I FIGHT TEARS BACK
HOPING THAT HE RESTS IN PEACE
MY MIND IS SO TORN APART
THAT I CAN BARELY EAT
ITS HARD FOR ME TO WRITE ABOUT WHAT HAPPENED LAST NIGHT
ANOTHER MINNEAPOLIS MURDER
THAT STARTED WITH A FIGHT
CHRIS LITTLE WAS HIT
ONCE IN THE BACK
AND ONCE IN THE CHEST
HE MADE IT TO THE HOSPITAL
WHERE HE BREATHED HIS LAST BREATH
PEACE
(REST IN PEACE)
Copyright ©
YoungArra
... [
2004-05-29 10:41:00]
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Re: MINNEAPOLIS MURDER
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 10:59:15 AM AEST
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| This is so raw and emotional... I'm hesitant to even comment. There is truly nothing I can say except that your pain is obvious in this piece and I am so touched by your willingness to share it. I am very sorry for your loss. |
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Re: MINNEAPOLIS MURDER
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by pixie on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 12:07:59 PM AEST
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This is such a sad poem, fueled by raw emotion and hurt, I am also very sorry to hear of your loss of a close friend.
Takecare,
Pixie xx |
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Re: MINNEAPOLIS MURDER
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by Jenni_K on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:11:38 PM AEST
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Thank you for sharing your heart with us..this is terribly sad and I know no words will bring comfort.... Stay strong....
Hugs
Jenni
P/S..welcome to YPDC..the site where people care about fellow poets.... JK |
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Re: MINNEAPOLIS MURDER
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by TheWordChirugeon on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 08:14:26 AM AEST
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Dear:
[ ] Loser [ ] Lamer [ ] AOLer
[ ] Me-too-er [ ] Pervert [ ] Geek
[ ] Spammer [ ] Nerd [ ] Martyr
[ ] Fed [ ] Freak [ ] Scientologist
[ ] Socialist [ ] Stain [ ] Anonymous
You Are Being Flamed Because:
[ ] Your lame advertising message has firmly convinced me to ignore you
[ ] You posted a "test" in a newsgroup other than alt.test
[ ] You posted an "everyone is against me/my race/my religion/my country" message
[ X ] You posted in ALLCAPS
[ ] You quoted an ENTIRE post in your reply
[ ] You continued a long, stupid thread
[ ] You started an off-topic thread
[ ] You posted a "YOU ALL SUCK" message
[ ] You said "me too" to something
[ X ] You suck
[ ] You brag about things that never happened
[ ] Your sig/alias/server sucks
[ ] You made up slang then used it in a message
[ ] You posted a phone-sex ad
[ ] You were imposing your religious beliefs on others
[ X ] You posted something really stupid/depraved
[ ] You tried to blame others for your stupidity
[ ] you incorrectly assumed unwarranted moral or intellectual superiority
[ ] you are posting an anonymous attack
To Repent, You Must:
[ ] Give up your AOL account
[ ] Give up your CIS account
[ ] Bust up your modem with a hammer and eat it
[ X ] Jump into a bathtub while holding your monitor
[ ] Actually post something relevant
[ ] Read the FAQ
[ ] Be the guest of honor in alt.flame for a month
[ ] Post your tests to alt.test
[ ] Print your home phone number in your adverts
[ ] Slam your fingers in a desk drawer repeatedly
[ ] Verify the effect of gravity by jumping from the nearest bridge
In Closing, I'd Like to Say:
[ ] Get a life
[ ] Never post again
[ X ] I pity your dog
[ ] Remove yourself from our presence
[ ] Take your crap somewhere else
[ ] Learn to post or sod off
[ X ] Do us all a favor and crawl into some industrial machinery
[ ] See how far your tongue will fit into the electric outlet
[ ] Get a clue
[ ] All of the above |
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