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how it must suck to be my father
Contributed by
purplestary
on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:07:26 AM in AEST
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I’m not you
I’m just your mistake
and I laugh at what you did.
you never wanted me
and you treated thus
and I guess it must suck to be you
I hated the neglect
but I laugh at you now
you did the deed and had to pay your price
and I bet you lie awake at night
wondering about me
and I bet you lie awake sometimes
and wish you hadn’t of had me
It must eat at you every day
to know nothing of your daughter
how did I grow up?
who am I becoming?
ha, you’ll never know
you had me and got rid of me
never even noticed me
it’s too late to wish now
too late to want a chance
but even if you had that reward
you wouldn’t know what to do
you’d be in such awe and shock
at the women that I can be
I’m your mistake
the one you never wanted
the one you now wish you had
and I laugh at what you did.
oh how it must suck to be the one
who had to pay child support
but never had so much as a picture
oh how it must suck to be you!
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Re: how it must suck to be my father
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by mountainhigh on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:14:08 AM AEST
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You express that anger with much grace, I know a boy who felt that way toward a mother who did the same.
I see his beautiful smile each and everyday, he is and always be my reason to live, as I' m sure there is one who feels as I do, all about how wonderful you are as well.
Thank you for sharing this. You said it so well.
Chris |
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Re: how it must suck to be my father
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:14:38 AM AEST
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from reading this I can't get "Sucks To Be You" by Prozzak out of my head... lol, sorry.
this is a really good write.. thanks for sharing |
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Re: how it must suck to be my father
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:44:36 AM AEST
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| This is very well constructed and honestly emotional at the same time ---- a combination that's nearly impossible to achieve. I am impressed. Extremely well done!!!!!! |
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Re: how it must suck to be my father
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by laststarontheleft on
Sunday, 20th December 2009 @ 06:37:57 AM AEST
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I wonder if my daughter's father will feel the same?
He abandoned her just before she was 2.
Not a card, a phone call, even a murmur.
Too bad he has missed out on such a beautiful
creation that he was part of, & not a second will he ever get back.
This is extremely well written!
Star x x x |
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