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As long as I am alive......
Contributed by
ravisada
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Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 08:10:24 AM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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Always, your soul reside in my heart
Our love is not like gloomy, bright like sunshine
We share our wonderful feelings without hesitation
I immerse you completely into me when you give me yourself
You purified my soul and brought out my emotions
I never knew that your love will bring out my real life
There is so much love unfolding from my heart
and its need your love to free from my loneliness
Sometimes its aches because we are far apart
Sometimes tears slips down my face because
your part of my bed is vacant and kept me sad
A kiss on my lips could wet my heart with heaviness
I will always love you even when the rain wash me out
or the sun burns me out or the winds takes me away
As long as I am alive, my love for you will not die
Ravi Sathasivam / Sri Lanka
Copyright ©2004 Ravi Sathasivam
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ravisada
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Re: As long as I am alive......
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by pixie on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:14:20 AM AEST
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Awwwww I am sorry for your pain... but the poem was beautifully written,
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Re: As long as I am alive......
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by mountainhigh on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 09:21:08 AM AEST
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This is so beautiful, such a deserving love.
I loved this one. Another beautiful write, thank you Ravi.
Chris |
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Re: As long as I am alive......
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by Archie on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 05:12:25 AM AEST
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| This is a good poem |
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