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Take My Heart
Contributed by
WildSwan
on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:49:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Take My Heart
So you are leaving me?
Your heart have grown hard and cold.
There's nothing that I can do,
No effort's enough for us to hold.
You've decided to go your way,
From me you're turning your back.
There seems nothing left for me,
What you're leaving's a cloud so black.
I can only watch you walk away,
Pains but left for me to undergo.
Since I am but to be loveless,
Please take my heart when you go.
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WildSwan
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2004-05-29 01:49:10]
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Re: Take My Heart
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by dragon on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:01:59 AM AEST
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This very well written and I can tell its from personal experance. keep up the good work, I look forward to reading more from you soon
always
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Re: Take My Heart
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:02:07 AM AEST
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short and direct, its never easy to be left when you still love them, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Take My Heart
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by venkat on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:10:47 AM AEST
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| well written...welcome to ypdc..keep writing..venkat |
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Re: Take My Heart
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by CarrieLynn on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:25:58 PM AEST
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| aww... thats a sad poem but its very well written i liked it..., carrie |
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