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son
Contributed by
pa1602002
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Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:32:27 AM in AEST
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I do not fear the darkness,son
for I know it has to come
I do not fear what I will leave behind
I have done my best to raise you from a boy to a man
I do not fear the darkness, son
for I know I leave you behind
worry not for the worlds loss
worry for the gain
one old man passes on, but many still remain
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Re: son
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by venkat on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:37:58 AM AEST
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| Good..I liked it. venkat |
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Re: son
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by dragon on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:49:12 AM AEST
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really nice peom
dragon |
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Re: son
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by CarrieLynn on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 10:16:11 PM AEST
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| thats a neat poem i like how not all the words match up and ryme but yet its really free flowing... its really good..., carrie |
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Re: son
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:07:05 PM AEST
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| excellent write. |
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