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Pages Untouched
Contributed by
merry
on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:06:32 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Pages flutter back and forth untouched
Sun seeps its rays in me
Give up rhinestone beads of sweat
From the corner of my eye
Immobile now and melting
Percolating in the sun
Like some cocooned thing come undone
Drawn outside to read a book
Long abandoned for a nap
Daydreams tantalize the mind
Possibilities reach the sky
Fantasy unfurls its wings
Fanning flames, stirring things
Lilacs perfume the air
Bees buzz in symphony
Ice cubes melting in a glass
Limbs relax to welcome sleep
Pages flutter back and forth untouched
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Copyright ©
merry
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2004-05-28 21:06:32]
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Re: Pages Untouched
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:29:19 PM AEST
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sounds dreamy.................... hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Pages Untouched
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:19:11 PM AEST
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restful this is what I did yesterday I loved the display of images scents and sound that you created here tis true dreamy
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Re: Pages Untouched
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by Rakerman1999 on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 07:11:06 AM AEST
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I read this and was in a sun chair on a summers day drifting off to dreamland. You always amaze me with you clarity of thought, not to mention your incredible talent. ;o).
Very well done as always
Roses for my daisy
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Re: Pages Untouched
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by Stitch on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 05:04:34 PM AEST
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Mmmmmmm. Such a blissful feeling. So seldom I partake, but when I allow myself. Ahhhhh. This write was like a little mini-vacation for me. Thanks.
Stitch |
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Re: Pages Untouched
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by Elena on
Wednesday, 9th June 2004 @ 03:05:03 PM AEST
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Well written - next best thing to being there.
E |
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