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If You Remember

Contributed by skyyblu on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:00:12 PM in AEST
Topic: LoveRemembered

~His Version (though I don't know all the lyrics)

If this is bringing you down
Let it bring me back to you
I'm acting stupid right now
Isn't there something I can do?
If you remember,
Could you write me a letter?
You don't have to say much
Just a How Do You Do would do

Is this bringing you down?
'Cause it's tearing me apart
If this is funny somehow
Could you tell it to my heart?
If you remember,
Could you write me a letter?
Or send me a postcard...
Or a picture would be better

Between us there were miles,
Now there's earth and sky
When you died,
My heart had died with you.
Just want you to know that,

I have died with you...

~My version~

If this is weighing you down
I'll carry your burden for you
With a broken back my stride won't break
I'll walk a million miles in your place
Rest your weary soul
For you I'll do anything

But if this is bringing you down
I'll lift you up again--
To the highest mountain, I won't give in,
Until I see your smiling face
Please don't turn away
You'll take my heart with you
If you remember, could you say a quick hello
Don't have to say much
Just a "How Do You Do" would do

Bits and peices of nothing
Are all I have left to give
Please give me a chance
Spare a passing glance
I'll turn a kiss into so much more
I'll catch a falling star for you
We'll dance upon a rainbow
Our sorrows will be no more
Let me fill the empty spaces in your soul

For if I see you die with her
Surely I will die with you...

Copyright © skyyblu ... [ 2004-05-28 21:00:12]
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Re: If You Remember (User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 10:26:37 PM AEST
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I love this...it's very bittersweet... good job

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