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Nothing
Contributed by
ila
on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 02:19:51 PM in AEST
Topic:
LoveRemembered
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In my mind so dark and cold
the feeling I felt just few moments ago.
It`s the only thing I always feared to feel,
never thought you`d be the one to make me kneel.
I`ve known you like forever,
we`ve beed good friends and that was it.
Then someday something happened
and from that day on it wasn`t like before.
Everytime I saw you walking towards me
something moved and I felt week.
I couldn`t fight, deep inside it felt like...
like this, right now is everything I need.
It made me happy, I was thrilled,
proud to feel this feeling.
At no time hurt or desperate,
free to reveal my thinking.
I knew I shouldn`t hope for anything.
And it was alright ... as long as I knew.
There was no dark mysteries between us,
not a thing I couldn`t tell you.
After it happened ... none of this changed.
Nothing but the flame inside me died.
The feeling that meant so much all this time ...
was gone.
Copyright ©
ila
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2004-05-28 14:19:51]
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Re: Nothing
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 02:24:54 PM AEST
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What a wonderful way to say it!
And a beautiful attitude too,
Very nicely written! |
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Re: Nothing
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:29:43 AM AEST
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Nice write. I could relate to the emotion you put in this.
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