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Why Mommy Hates You
Contributed by
Vermillion
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Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 12:59:45 PM in AEST
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why mommy hates you
mommy hates you when your mad
mommy hates you when your sad
mommy hates you when you smile
mommy has hated you for a while
mommy hates you when your blue
mommy hates the crap you put her through
mommy hates you when you cry
mommy hates that your alive
mommy hates you when you don't go to bed
mommy hates you even if you were dead
mommy hates you when you play with yourself
mommy wishes you'd play with somebody else
mommy hates you when you don't leave
mommy hates you when you breathe
mommy hates you because your you
mommy wishes she had stabbed you with a cloths hangar while you where in the womb
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Re: Why Mommy Hates You
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by pixie on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 01:09:15 PM AEST
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Wow, very raw and emotive,... great write
Pixie xx |
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Re: Why Mommy Hates You
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 01:15:10 PM AEST
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| this couldn't be good for the child... |
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Re: Why Mommy Hates You
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 01:20:29 PM AEST
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| You sure have had a bad life, to have feelings like this and poetry you write. I thought I had it bad growing up. can't compare to yours. we love you here on ypdc. keep writing your feelings down. see a good heart in you. see the love that is there. can't wait to see it all written down in here. one day you will be happier. someone will come in and love you like you should . sandy |
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Re: Why Mommy Hates You
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by EvaRee on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 01:20:58 PM AEST
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| I really hope this isn't the way you feel about a child.....this just disgustes me....every child deserves to be loved, and it's sad because there are people like this and it's those people are the ones who dont deserve to live......i cant even begin to describe how much this infuriates me...it's sad |
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Re: Why Mommy Hates You
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 03:17:02 PM AEST
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| Wow, that was a really powerful poem! I loved how repetitive it was. It really helped build up the emotions in the piece. Terrific job! I hope you haven't had to experience any of this.... |
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Re: Why Mommy Hates You
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:10:21 AM AEST
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Oh My God .Thats So Powerful and the ending is so pungent. Wow that pulls at the soul.
Whisper
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Re: Why Mommy Hates You
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by brigitte7735 on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:59:13 PM AEST
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of course its sad, and sure every child deserves to be loved. but people are not perfect, thats whats so beautiful about this. There are going to be times in your life when you think terrible things
Vanessa |
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Re: Why Mommy Hates You
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by Alli on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 10:15:03 AM AEST
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| Wow, my jaw actually dropped on this on. Very well-written as far as raw emotion goes. This is a poem that touches people, it gets stuck in your head. Disturbing and beautiful. |
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Re: Why Mommy Hates You
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by shorty_52 on
Thursday, 3rd June 2004 @ 06:09:24 PM AEST
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this is very creepy. i hope that it is not true. good poem however even if it is a little grose.
sorry if that took affence.
~allyson~ |
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Re: Why Mommy Hates You
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by RhythmBndt on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:20:38 AM AEST
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| Creepy. The last line reminded me of Mommie Dearest. |
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Re: Why Mommy Hates You
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by assassinatorgirl on
Tuesday, 29th November 2005 @ 07:01:24 PM AEST
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| LOL that's terrible, but in a funny way, nice write =P |
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Re: Why Mommy Hates You
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by Seans_Girl on
Saturday, 29th July 2006 @ 07:43:29 PM AEST
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Wow this is just really sad. I've read some of your poetry and they are all either sad, depressing or gruesome. I don't always write what I feel myself but from how many poems you have written it sounds like you had a pretty bad life. That is too bad. I hope your life is better now
Natalie |
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