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Alas! if there was she...
Contributed by
Paploo
on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 10:19:50 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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there are wishes...
as well as those few curses,
there are dreams...
as well as those few nightmares,
there are smiles...
as well as those few screams...
there are sunshines...
as well as those few Clouds of despair...
there are friends...
as well as those few enemies...
there are all the colours that life could give...
but alas! if there was SHE...
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Paploo
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2004-05-28 10:19:50]
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Re: Alas! if there was she...
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by Silent-No-More on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 10:48:25 AM AEST
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| I like this.... It reminded me of years ago (I won't tell you how many) when I received a poem titled SHE from a now ex. I was enormously touched by it... I still have it today. This, undoubtedly, would be just as touching to your "she". Nicely done. |
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Re: Alas! if there was she...
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:29:36 AM AEST
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What a lovely world you two would live in. Great thoughts, acceptance of life on its terms. Hope your SHE arrives soon.
Rita |
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Re: Alas! if there was she...
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:37:50 PM AEST
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awww, well written and wonderful expression of feelings, warm welcome to ypdc:) hugs n' love nessa
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