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A Midnight Whisper
Contributed by
carebear
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Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 08:47:39 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Her hair spread across the pillow
Fragrant smell of vanilla on her delicate skin
Beautiful her body calm while she sleeps
Soft white sheet covering what secrets she hides.
One hand lay cradled under her chin
The moon glistens upon her, she is a archangel with love
Last of the burning candles flicker around the room
Her lavender eyes shine affectionate magic.
Sensation from within her incredible kisses
Her palms expressive of emotions tingling on my chest
Linking our bodies together tenderness of desire
A midnight whisper silently bonded.
Copyright ©
carebear
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2004-05-28 08:47:39]
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Re: A Midnight Whisper
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:22:10 AM AEST
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awwwwwwwwwww very nice, very vivd.
nice write, keep it up! |
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Re: A Midnight Whisper
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by pixie on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:48:25 AM AEST
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This is a wonderful and happy poem... I can tell that you enjoyed writing this one,about your girlfriend, as I do when I write about my boyfriend.
Great write,
Pixie xx
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Re: A Midnight Whisper
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by blueheart on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:16:36 PM AEST
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| Beautiful and oh so romantic. Lovely write. |
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Re: A Midnight Whisper
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by Whisper on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 01:38:57 AM AEST
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What a wonderful write. The words you have chosen make the soft shadows of your Love for her, alive.
Whisper |
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Re: A Midnight Whisper
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by -thesiscokid- on
Tuesday, 1st June 2004 @ 06:22:39 PM AEST
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| ALL i have to say i wow!This was very beautfiul. I hope to read more. |
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