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what would you do
Contributed by
spooky
on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 04:00:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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what would you do if the lord came to you,
what would you say,
what would you think,
what would you do,
I would think why,,
why come to me,,
a sinner,
all thought would rush through my mind,,
eveything that I've done wrong,,
what would you do if the lord,
was to say to you,
come to me, an serve me,,
what would you do
be as a child in heaven,
in a beautiful masion,
what would you do,,
still thinking of what you done wrong,,
couldn't say nothing,,
amazed, and confussed,,
what would you do,
I dont know,,
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Re: what would you do
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by ladyfawn on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:36:00 PM AEST
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i would invite him in for a cuppa tea, im not impressed by fame, hugs n' love nessa
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Re: what would you do
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Friday, 25th June 2004 @ 04:43:42 AM AEST
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I would have asked him why he made my life almost unbearable to live ask him why I chose to try and commit suicide mutiple times...thast what I would do....lol but thats just me I liked this one a lot lots of feeling really makes you think...
read and comment my stuff if you want Id love to hear what you think...
much love,
Dani
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Re: what would you do
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by emystar on
Monday, 28th June 2004 @ 03:45:12 AM AEST
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Well I wouldn't do anything different 'cause he never left me.
good writing.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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