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two words at a time
Contributed by
holderofthestone
on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 01:16:01 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I feel
so lost
without you
so tossed
I cant
seem to
get away
escape you
your grasp
your eyes
your sins
your lies
haunt me
every day
taunt me
many ways
I cry
I scream
god d*mn
these dreams
you wont
go away
every night
every day
i wish
i could
lose you
i should
walk out
turn leave
but I
still believe
that I
love you
pretty dumb
to do
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holderofthestone
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2004-05-28 01:16:01]
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Re: two words at a time
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by shelby on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 02:46:28 AM AEST
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I liked ur mixture of emotions and style on this write well done
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Re: two words at a time
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by TheVoice on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 09:34:12 PM AEST
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Unique. I Liked it.
The Voice
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Re: two words at a time
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 10:23:00 PM AEST
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This poem was very unusal indeed!
I enjoyed reading it though, and with few words you have said it all.
Very good write
lovingcritters
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Re: two words at a time
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by Silent-No-More on
Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 02:33:44 PM AEST
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Ohhhhh nicely done! I like the attempt a new style - I think you nailed it! And... as always, you've got my heart pitter pattering a little heavier than it usually does. *sigh*
I cry
I scream
god d*mn
these dreams
Yeh.. I know the feeling. I love the whole thing... fabulous cadence! |
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Re: two words at a time
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by Living_In_My_Dream on
Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:52:50 AM AEST
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I feel
so lost
without you
you shouldnt because you obviously know yourself and have found yourself if you are able to write about all these things...I loved this one...the title goes well...I loved every word of this...
much love,
Dani
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