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Can Never Be
Contributed by
blackmarker
on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:32:25 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Porcelain mask
Concealing the truth
Yet revealing your lies
Constricted skin
Goosebumps reign
Sunday shivers
Rippling down your spine
Coursing through your arteries
Crystal blue veins
Unfolding across your skin
Slice them open
Wait and watch
Tell me what happens
What you feel
As your blood drains away
Staining, tainting the ground I worship
The ground you walk on
No longer
No longer waiting
Nor watching
Nor feeling
No longer breathing
Lungs relaxed
Muscles no longer taut
No more feelings
Just an empty shell
Of all you can never be.
Copyright ©
blackmarker
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2004-05-27 21:32:25]
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Re: Can Never Be
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by bttrflynajar on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:42:03 PM AEST
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| well i apologize for my last comment. it seems i was wrong about your...vocabulary, slash educational level. this poem is very descriptive, and a very nice piece of work. please keep on writing. |
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Re: Can Never Be
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by Sylvias on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 11:23:37 PM AEST
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| I really like this. It's very descriptive. |
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