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Promise Ring

Contributed by MisterRight on Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 01:45:00 PM in AEST
Topic: LovePoetry



This promise you know, I made some time ago
I haven’t had the chance to keep
The promise to fulfill, your desires at will
The promise of love so deep
The promise to be together, and love you forever
Never less than I do today
The promise to protect you, to never neglect you
And to never go astray
It is a promise of, an everlasting love
Close to my heart it lingers
Each and every night, I pray for the sight
Of my promise upon your finger
This promise I bring, in the form of a ring
Suspended from a chain around my neck
If you and I, are never given a try
This promise can’t be kept
The promise patiently waits, and anticipates
As it longs to hold your hand
With some time, this promise of mine
I’ll replace with a wedding band
Remove this promise of mine, from the chain that binds
I assure you you’ll feel no regret
Please don’t deny, the love in my eyes
My promise must be kept




Copyright © MisterRight ... [ 2002-10-11 13:45:00]
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Re: Promise Ring (User Rating: 1 )
by addie on Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 01:57:28 PM AEST
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beautiful write ..i am sure things will work out with you....if she's ur true love .. she will come back to you

take care
addie


Re: Promise Ring (User Rating: 1 )
by Jenni_Kalicharan on Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 03:51:24 PM AEST
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Curtis, This is brilliant!! I love the rhyming pattern... Wish you well... (Cook her a sumptuous meal!!!)
Jenni


Re: Promise Ring (User Rating: 1 )
by LOWMAN613 on Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 08:39:20 AM AEST
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I don't know who you are but if you let her read this she will melt! Good luck & Good Write!!!


Re: Promise Ring (User Rating: 1 )
by Lia on Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 09:22:47 AM AEST
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Curtis...it's always been quite obvious that you have always kept your promise. Your side of the bargain so to say. I know how bad this all must be tearing you apart.




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