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when youll run to me

Contributed by holderofthestone on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:17:42 PM in AEST
Topic: EmotionalPoetry



why do I stand for this,
I take it from you and I know I shouldn’t.
I tell myself I’m strong enough to withstand you,
but I fall ever time you are near.
You force me to be weak
I see the real you and know what you want.
but you don’t see it
so I tell myself I still have a chance...
to convince your heart.
but you don’t care to listen
you don’t want to hear me...
just what you believe about him
but its false
and I see he doesn’t hold you as dear as I
he doesn’t want you the same way that I do
he wasn’t there before,
he left you for another,
and didn’t even bother to come around
to call
to see if you need anything
but you run to him
every time
every chance
I was there
I never left
I always give you what you need
without you even asking....
but you don’t even see me in the shadows
crying over my loss
you just strut in his arms
and flaunt what you give him
because you don’t want to see me
you know I’m there, you know I cry
but you want to keep me hanging on
keep someone around who you know cares
in case he leaves you again...
like you know he will
and I tell you he will
but you run to him
everyday
and I’m so angry with it...
because I will have to pick up the pieces
I will have to hold your tears
I will be the one to mend your heart
because I care
because I would never leave you
even though you don’t want me...
I try to show you how much you mean to me
but you run to him
all the time
every time
and I struggle to maintain
to keep it together
to not breakdown
because I know
sooner or later, without fail
he will break your heart....
and this is when....
and only when...
you’ll run to me.




Copyright © holderofthestone ... [ 2004-05-27 21:17:42]
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Re: when youll run to me (User Rating: 1 )
by LittleWillow on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:30:15 PM AEST
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Wow.
Your emotions are very well expressed.


Re: when youll run to me (User Rating: 1 )
by blackmarker on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:43:58 PM AEST
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Such emotion.. so raw and strong.. amazing. Great job


Re: when youll run to me (User Rating: 1 )
by fbijedi on Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:10:10 PM AEST
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I understand what you are talking about all too well! Great job, emotions very clear. Almost too clear!


Re: when youll run to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 03:11:22 AM AEST
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wow, i can relate to this very much and understand the frustration.. excellent expression


Re: when youll run to me (User Rating: 1 )
by pixie on Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 06:11:45 AM AEST
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Greatly written .........5+++++

pixie xx


Re: when youll run to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Silent-No-More on Saturday, 29th May 2004 @ 06:36:52 PM AEST
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oh holder.... this borders on tragic. If you were in love and stupid (a/k/a "blind) like so many are - I'd be tempted to tell you to move on, to forget her, to.... whatever. Alas!... you are in love and fully aware. Fully aware. The last two lines... *sigh*... I don't begin to know what to say.

Emotionally powerful --- as always.



Re: when youll run to me (User Rating: 1 )
by Living_In_My_Dream on Wednesday, 16th June 2004 @ 04:57:52 AM AEST
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I really dont know the words for this...spectacular I'd give it all the stars in the uiniverse if i could only grasp them...I liked this one...a lot...powerful very powerful...speechless...
much love,
Dani
xoxoxo




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