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Silent Screams
Contributed by
bttrflynajar
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:59:07 PM in AEST
Topic:
hbadday
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as im sitting in my bedroom
with all the lights off
i think of how to let it out
the pillows not enough
i close my eyes and try to sleep
try to keep the emerging tears in.
my world comes crashing in
and im stuck without a shield
a shield from all the hurt
a shield from all the anger
the pain is just to much
and i cant let it out.
so im silently screaming
pouring out my dry tears
letting out my feelings
without stirring any fears.
wont somebody help me
wont somebody hold me.
please some body care
please is anyone there?
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Re: Silent Screams
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by TheVoice on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:30:47 PM AEST
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we ARE here and we CARE!! i know full well the internal powers behind this write. i have a write that is very close to this titled "Mute Screams". it is scary in a way.
need an ear?
let me know.
the voice
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Re: Silent Screams
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by fbijedi on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:03:56 PM AEST
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| Wow, I can think of times where I've felt just like that. I know too that worst thing in that kind of situation is feeling all alone. If you really are feeling that way, I'm here. Keep up the good writing! |
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Re: Silent Screams
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by Whisper on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 12:09:11 AM AEST
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Good write. I still scream in my pillow. :-) More oft it helps.Good strong write Butterfly . Your not in a jat at all.
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Re: Silent Screams
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by secretwind on
Sunday, 6th March 2005 @ 02:36:53 PM AEST
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I feel you on this one
silently we scream together.
The Wind.... |
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