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the fall
Contributed by
Luinil
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:37:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
selfstruggles
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There they stand
On the top of the mountain
Looking down on me
With taunting laughter and pity
Footholds hide from view
My tears bleed at the thought of you
Rain falls like flaming needles
I can’t out-climb my gruesome evils
Closer, closer to the mountain’s top
Trembling arms yearning for the drop
Light embraces black in the last dying ember
One last tear falls, falls in my final surrender
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Luinil
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2004-05-27 20:37:02]
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Re: the fall
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by LittleWillow on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:13:27 PM AEST
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| I like your description. Thanks for your nice comment on my poem! |
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Re: the fall
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 11:46:59 AM AEST
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| that's an awesome metaphor. I can totally relate to that poem! |
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Re: the fall
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by SugimotoYouki on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 02:41:11 PM AEST
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*sniff* this is so sad..
greatly put in words... |
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