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The Winner
Contributed by
blackmarker
on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:01:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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These feelings are such that I can’t explain
Feelings of loneliness, desire and pain
With hurt so strong, tears inevitably fall
Kick me while I’m down, while I’m learning to crawl
Burn me while I scream, writhe in agony,
Scald me with your piercing eyes that seem to look through me
My pain is so obvious, how can you be so blind?
You drive me crazy, always on my mind
You torture me, my crumbling soul
My heart is black, charred like coal
It’s all because of you
The mind games that you play
There’s nothing I can do
I’m nothing but your prey
Like a moth to your flame
Foolishly I was drawn in
A stupid pawn in your ***** up game
You said I’d never win
But I’ll take my life
A stalemate
A rusted knife
Just you wait!
I’ll be dead
And then you’ll see
That in the end
The winner –
Is me.
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blackmarker
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2004-05-27 20:01:41]
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Re: The Winner
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:10:57 PM AEST
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| wow...very well expressed...i can feel your anger and your need to overcome this. great great write.. i love the end. you have great talent |
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Re: The Winner
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by holderofthestone on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:24:28 PM AEST
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| Deep. and I think this is a great peom, dont be so hard on yourself. great job here! good luck |
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