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Psycho Flesh Beater Beg For More
Contributed by
pyrofungus
on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:19:54 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Shut your filthy mouth
I'm exposing your disgusting era
and joining your sickly motivated cult
Psycho flesh beater make my skin turn red
Strap me down
Whip me raw
Slit me open
Watch me bleed
Taste my blood
And lick it up
Crave the flesh
The filthy beating of the flesh!
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2004-05-27 19:19:54]
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Re: Psycho Flesh Beater Beg For More
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by purplestary on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:25:59 PM AEST
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| wow...short yet very strong write. nice. |
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Re: Psycho Flesh Beater Beg For More
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:27:20 PM AEST
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very powerful
the rhythm isn't flowing, but it's... I don't know... it's just right for this poem... it just... fits.
Bravo and encore
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: Psycho Flesh Beater Beg For More
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by blackmarker on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:03:01 PM AEST
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| Such emotion portrayed in such a short poem.. wonderful job! |
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Re: Psycho Flesh Beater Beg For More
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by Luinil on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:39:34 PM AEST
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| very graphic... i think it's great! keep up the good work |
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