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blood filed eyes
Contributed by
mystical_illusion
on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:58:01 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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Crushing me must be so nice,
you do it so well,
and without looking twice.
Smash my world, kill my soul,
Watch me cry, Watch me bleed.
Glass breaking in my eyes,
Close them to slowly,
Left squinting in agony
forced to watch as my heart dies.
Past the pain,
Past the suffering
there you stand - grin glowing.
Dragging my body through tomorrow
Sleepless and taking my time,
Debating on startign another day,
and pretending this life isnt mine.
Within my tired eyes
the tears keep forever falling,
Impossible to forget the memories,
the past never stops calling.
The pain you've caused me
never fades away,
When burning in Hell, I hope you'll see.
I push you aside,
but you're never far behind,
It's like an endless nightmare
Unable to awake,
You're trapped within my mind.
Confined in the perpetual pattern,
Sequence of my demise,
Please shut the door behind you,
as i forever close by blood filled eyes.
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2004-05-27 18:58:01]
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Re: blood filed eyes
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:02:50 PM AEST
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A little greusome and eerie, but very deep. Good write. Bravo and encore.
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Re: blood filed eyes
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by bobotheclown on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 07:04:30 PM AEST
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wow very tough to read there was no beating around the bush in this one you just bared your pain for the world to see. I liked though and the imagery was amazing.
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