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Don't Touch That Switch!
Contributed by
Juliet
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 05:33:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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I can see her silhouette in the mirror,
sauntering into the darkened room.
I do not see her face, only a glare from her eyes
and her hips swaying.
She is standing next to me and trying to take me over,
and beginning to succeed,
until he comes from behind and scares away my spirit by turning on the light.
I try to find her and bring her back,
but she has hidden herself among the dark places,
afraid to show herself
until she knows it is safe to be bad once again.
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Juliet
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2004-05-27 17:33:29] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Don't Touch That Switch!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Whisper on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:05:00 PM AEST (User
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I liked this one. I think all of us have the other person who "do come out" to explore evry now and then. Welcome to the Club :-)
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Re: Don't Touch That Switch!
(User Rating: 1 ) by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 08:04:16 AM AEST (User
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interesting... I like it |
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Re: Don't Touch That Switch!
(User Rating: 1 ) by HellsLibrarian on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 11:00:46 PM AEST (User
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oooh, good angel, bad angel. Me gusta. |
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