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Together
Contributed by
boricuacd
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 05:01:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
ambiguous
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Jumping, climbing,
Screaming, yelling,
Whining, friendly banter.
Hitting, kicking,
Pulling, spitting,
Biting, loving laughter.
Pushing, shoving,
Telling, crying,
Together ever after.
Together they play,
Together they grow,
Together they fight and then laughter.
Apart they regret,
Apart they forget,
And forgive much faster.
Loving together,
Quarrelling forever,
But together ever after.
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2004-05-27 17:01:47] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Together
(User Rating: 1 ) by Broken_Skin on
Monday, 31st May 2004 @ 08:59:28 AM AEST (User
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very very good, *is impressed* i love the layout, works great. I think you've got it down to a T, there's not anything i can think to improve. :D x |
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Re: Together
(User Rating: 1 ) by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 06:26:35 PM AEST (User
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good poem nice write
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