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Ranaway
Contributed by
sad_lonely_teen14
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:29:48 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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There was a girl who ranaway,
now she really has to pay.
She's in the hospital after being abused,
because a guy wanted her shoes.
He punched her in the head a few times,
but this isn't his first comitting this crime.
Now she wishes she never ranaway,
because she could've been alive today.
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sad_lonely_teen14
... [
2004-05-27 16:29:48]
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Re: Ranaway
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:32:27 PM AEST
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Wow...thats short but pretty deep, im sorry this had to happen to your friend
Take care
Sam |
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Re: Ranaway
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by dragonlover on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:36:10 PM AEST
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| very nice detail. i like it |
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Re: Ranaway
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by liquidsunshine on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 05:30:27 PM AEST
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So much emotion, and so few words to the poem. It's a great poem, but I'm sorry you had to write it, I mean... the circumstances being what they are and all. Keep writing, always.
Love,
Chelsea |
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Re: Ranaway
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by Writting_Fever on
Saturday, 30th July 2005 @ 09:34:15 PM AEST
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This is an amazing poem. Full of emotion tho so short. You have a tallent, along with courage. Keep it up. I feel for you.
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Re: Ranaway
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by outlaw_mutiny on
Thursday, 1st December 2005 @ 06:20:10 PM AEST
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that sucks but why did she run away
and why are you sad and lonely
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