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Frozen
Contributed by
Dierna
on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:23:03 PM in AEST
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Frozen inside
Without you
Leave me here
How can you
Take the fools
Way out
A witches spell
Cast by an Angel
I try to release
What was never mine
I try to release
The love inside
Frozen inside
Without you
Leave me here
How can you
Take the fools
Way out
Leaving me
I don't get a choice
Coward, Fool!
The love of my life
All describe
The one that was never mine.
Frozen inside
Without you
Leave me here
How can you
Take the fools
Way out
Bound by power
love and soul
You never were
You always are
The one inside me
The one I can never reach
Frozen inside
Without you
Leave me here
How can you
Take the fools
Way out
Saved by Grace
Called by god
Bring back the feelings
Return the life
Bring back the
Love inside!
Copyright ©
Dierna
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2004-05-27 16:23:03]
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Re: Frozen
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by Overstated on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:50:55 PM AEST
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| nice heartfelt piece nicely done!!! |
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Re: Frozen
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:10:38 PM AEST
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Nice .I can almost hear those words put to music.
Whisper
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Re: Frozen
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by Kusko on
Monday, 21st June 2004 @ 07:11:33 PM AEST
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Good
but the spacing of the poem is too broken.
I really like the ideas behind it and the thoughts, but maybe you should try more flowing lines in your poetry.
Right now it sounds like spaztic sobs.
But that's not necessarily a bad thing if that's what you were going for.
~Kusko |
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