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Untitled
Contributed by
CeruleanScreams
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:49:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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The silky smoothness of razors against clenched tendons.
Cold metal beckoning burning blood.
The slight resistance of unyielding flesh against the blade...
Redness rising to quench my inner pain.
Pent-up fury dripping onto cold-white bathroom tiles.
Blood-thirst is sated.
Rage is lessened--
but the hopelessness remains.
Copyright ©
CeruleanScreams
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2004-05-27 15:49:13]
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Re: Untitled
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:58:55 PM AEST
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No title? Just curious. Why not title this...
Cerulean Screams? Or Silence Screams?
This is quite a gory write, but then again more than likely, you are feeling this way??
If you'd like to pm me, I'm always open.
Angel always...godspeed...joni |
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Re: Untitled
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:14:30 PM AEST
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wow now this is pretty gripping. No pun intended.
The realism in your words are there but surely you know that the words spoken is not
the answer. Pen your feelings down and set them Free with/from your anger and rage there.
Peace
Whisper |
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Re: Untitled
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by marijuana on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 08:09:54 AM AEST
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| wow really sucked me in. its so real yet beautiful. very nice |
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