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Jolt of numbness
Contributed by
purplestary
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:23:49 PM in AEST
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Goodbye to hope
Hello to pain
Never saw it there
Hidding in it's corner
lied and unsuspected jolt
An electric shock of despair
it was a new breed of numb
stoed away in lugage
that took a life time to unpack
like a roach on moving day
tried to smack it with a shoe
but it ran too fast to catch
ran so far away
into it's dark a dreary corner
where human eye couldn't spot
only to jump back out again
hidding in it's corner
lied an unsuspected jolt
an electric shock of despair
it was a new breed of numb
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Re: Jolt of numbness
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:31:04 PM AEST
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hmm an interesting write,
i like it alot, |
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Re: Jolt of numbness
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 06:40:46 PM AEST
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I Like this one. The words ring true. The feelings are shared and I can relate to the numbing.
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Re: Jolt of numbness
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by Essentially9 on
Thursday, 24th June 2004 @ 10:49:48 PM AEST
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| i agree, very interesting. nice metaphors. |
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