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Im not angel or Godsend
Contributed by
little_genna
on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:35:28 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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You’re always there when I need you most.
Yet when you need someone, you only tell me when I ask.
I feel about as useful as a rotten post.
Yet you never do let it pass.
You know I’ll always listen to you.
I’ve always been your friend.
After all I’m little Titch to you.
My ear’s are there for you to bend.
I’m no angel or Godsend.
I cannot pretend you trying to end your life don’t matter.
I have always had a shoulder to lend.
Lets face it you have always been a good actor.
This time is different, you don’t reply.
I’m so worried I don’t know what should be done.
Worried to the point I want to cry or even maybe die.
This should never have even begun.
I want to be there to catch you.
Like you did for me.
To give you a hug and a tissue.
Though I don’t think you’ll let this be.
Too much of a guy’s guy to cry.
Even in front of your Little Splat.
You would prefer to die.
Well at least you know where I am if you want to chat.
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little_genna
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Re: Im not angel or Godsend
(User Rating: 1 ) by little_genna on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:51:30 PM AEST (User
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this is about the friend that caught me just as i was about to fall in 'words i did speak with my actions.' |
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Re: Im not angel or Godsend
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:59:19 PM AEST (User
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this is heavy and hopeful, i like the light at the end of the tunnel - good write! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Im not angel or Godsend
(User Rating: 1 ) by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:11:27 PM AEST (User
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I am sure he will let you in .
your a good friend just for being there,
be stronge ,good write, |
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Re: Im not angel or Godsend
(User Rating: 1 ) by gmcse8 on
Tuesday, 7th March 2006 @ 09:19:21 AM AEST (User
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nice poem. tells one a great deal about the author. I like the title most of all for some reason. When I read the poem I thought; to me at least it sounds as if your saying "Im not anything special, not an angel, just a human that cares what happens to you." Powerful message. bob |
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