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Through Ink and Through Paper
Contributed by
wachumiri
on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:28:39 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The stars that glimmered
In the night
Reflected on
The sea with might
A million diamonds
Their beauty display
The sea sings her song
A melodious lay
The words that I seek
To say to my love
All turn to folly
When I look up above
I see that the Maker
Put Love in the stars
The moon and the sea
That reaches so far
I understand now
That the voice in my heart
Can’t be turned into words
From my soul they won’t part
They’ll linger there always
Though trying to leave
Through ink and through paper
Their message to weave
Copyright ©
wachumiri
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2004-05-27 12:28:39]
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by pixie on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 12:38:55 PM AEST
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Trully an amazing and beautiful poem
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by Remy on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:00:38 PM AEST
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this is beautiful, what more is there to say? good write... ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by Fionndruinne on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:25:08 PM AEST
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Bravo! I like this one too wholeheartedly to say anything clever. Especially the fourth and fifth stanzas.
Well done, old chap!
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by kidpoet_213 on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 02:41:17 PM AEST
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Beautiful! Just beautiful!
~Donna~ |
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by Archie on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 03:46:07 PM AEST
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| This is an awesome poem, also thanks for reading my poems. --Archie |
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by faith_my_eyes on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 04:21:28 PM AEST
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ok, I'll be an echo... BEAUTIFUL! awe-inspiring! Isn't it amazing how the Lord is not only Creator, but our Greatest Love? God bless you my brother!
Em |
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by eatfresh22 on
Friday, 28th May 2004 @ 10:39:17 AM AEST
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David, you are soooo cool!!! That was such a beautiful poem. How true. Too bad we can't come up with words that can describe love, but I guess that's a good thing in many ways. Helps to keep it mysterious and "lovely". (excuse the pun). Well, once again, David, that was amazing. I am again left in awe.
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by liquidsunshine on
Tuesday, 8th June 2004 @ 08:45:12 PM AEST
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*sigh* Love, sweet love, why art thou so complex?
I really liked the title of this one. I must say, of what I've read this one is my favorite of yours so far.
Lots of love and peace be with you,
Chelsea
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by lexxie on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 06:38:24 PM AEST
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like everyone else has said a beautiful pome loved it!
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by ladyfawn on
Wednesday, 23rd June 2004 @ 03:22:14 PM AEST
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beautifully heartfelt:) hugs n' love nessa
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 03:18:16 AM AEST
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Truly beautiful.
Very imaginative, and very real as well.
Nice poem. |
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by justjonesy on
Saturday, 13th November 2004 @ 08:36:06 PM AEST
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| You have a great way with flows and wording...truly a great pure love poet |
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by Horsecrzy13 on
Thursday, 12th May 2005 @ 12:26:47 PM AEST
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| Great poem, very beautiful! |
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Re: Through Ink and Through Paper
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by anitajames on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:27:32 PM AEST
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This is a very touching and loving poem. Good write.
Ann |
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