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His Invitation
Contributed by
reilt
on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:09:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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Inside skin.
It's a wish...
Womanise me
Again.
He's rich in his appeal...
Slowly seeping.
Oh what a journey
To take
To earn the fortune felt
Too long...Two!
Where lies under his breathe
Beneath his flesh
TThe mystery of me
Unsolved...
The one I sought
And to be.
He fought for me once
And to discover me now...
Too late?
He's persistant in pursuit
Of the past
While I'm waiting
Where I always was...
Ready.
It's a wish,
His invitation
To enter into it.
Copyright ©
reilt
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2004-05-27 11:09:07]
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Re: His Invitation
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:42:45 AM AEST
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Wow. Good thing I don't have the energy today to react to this the way I might. Lost my breath, that's for sure.
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Re: His Invitation
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by Remy on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:18:12 PM AEST
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stop and go wording, sounds like the feeling in the poem... lovely writing... ;0)
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Re: His Invitation
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by bernard on
Sunday, 30th May 2004 @ 02:08:56 AM AEST
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This is the eternal longing expressed by the experienced love. great Poem full marks.
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