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4 U
Contributed by
danimus
on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 10:47:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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I'll have myself a morning treat
All dressed for 4 U
In a tired romantic mood
I'll have a plate of love 4 U
Hours got in the way
Such a long little wait
But in an hour or two you'll be awake
And I'll have something special 4 U
I have thoughts of touching your soft
When you smile while you sleep
Never valued things I've never bought
But yet I've never had you to meet
When awake your eyes drive me
Staring me out of my shell
I become the umbrella you need
Such a natural melody, I yell 4 U
Your lips quench my fustrations
Wet to ease my mind
I feel your name's vibrations
You are my infinite time
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danimus
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2004-05-27 10:47:32] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: 4 U
(User Rating: 1 ) by reilt on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 10:50:57 AM AEST (User
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oh wow such a romantic write. i loved all of it but the last line is my favourite. |
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Re: 4 U
(User Rating: 1 ) by Remy on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:25:05 PM AEST (User
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this is darling, sweet and a hint of, "awww! how cute!!" i love it! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: 4 U
(User Rating: 1 ) by bittersweet315 on
Monday, 3rd October 2005 @ 12:17:50 PM AEST (User
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Dan... I love this poem so much. Just so you know. :) |
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Re: 4 U
(User Rating: 1 ) by bittersweet315 on
Wednesday, 29th March 2006 @ 02:15:19 PM AEST (User
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i totally just made this poem my away message because i heart it so much. fyi. |
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