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Judgement Call
Contributed by
Fairy
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 10:37:28 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Have you lived behind my eyes?
Seen things that I have not?
Have you been with me when I’m losing a fight?
Did I tell you my deepest fears?
All my inner secrets from previous years?
Was I holding your hand when I contemplated suicide?
I must be mistaken
Because I thought I had been all alone.
Were you in the backseat?
My accomplice in crime?
The police officer had seen through my childish cries.
Lonely nights in an insane asylum,
Were driving me crazy.
Did you stay long enough during visitation,
To hold me as I cried?
I’m not sure,
But I’m almost positive that was you walking away.
How can you judge me as you do,
Without living one minute in my shoes?
Have you ever woken up and not know where you are?
Been scared beyond belief,
Ashamed because you were used?
If not, then tell me,
Why do you look at me as you do?
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Fairy
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Re: Judgement Call
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by pixie on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 10:40:39 AM AEST
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Wow, such a powerful poem, thanks for sharing it with us all,sorry for your pain....
pixie xx |
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Re: Judgement Call
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by reilt on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 11:00:06 AM AEST
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| such an emotional write...i felt your pain. take care |
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Re: Judgement Call
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by Remy on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 01:35:53 PM AEST
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erg, simple consideration isn't exactly a strength of the judgement callers... i know i've been a sucker to that repeatedly. besides that, great writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Judgement Call
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by Cole on
Saturday, 19th June 2004 @ 08:28:31 PM AEST
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Very well-written. I really enjoyed the lines:
"Lonely nights in an insane asylum,
Were driving me crazy."
Keep it up!
-Cole-
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