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Her Soul Dimming
Contributed by
phildel
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Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 11:30:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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By the opal light in my room,
She sits, unwilling to move,
Fading with an unquenched thirst,
I could never soothe.
My poor sweet Cassandra,
Sister of all youthful dreams,
We have shared out laughter
And now, we share our haunting screams.
I watch her face grow paler
In the absence of his care,
And sometimes she will talk
As if he were still all there.
I know the intricacies of her mind,
Weighed out the portions of her soul
And I know without a doubt this
Loss will devour her whole.
Him diseased and dying,
Her own cries underpinning...
I am forced to watch him die,
And watch her poor soul dimming.
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phildel
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2002-10-11 11:30:00]
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Re: Her Soul Dimming
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by LOWMAN613 on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 12:20:05 PM AEST
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| Really touching poem! It really got me! Great write! |
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Re: Her Soul Dimming
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by Lia on
Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 09:39:30 AM AEST
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| This is so sad...I shall say a prayer so that you may find some strength |
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Re: Her Soul Dimming
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by Former_Member on
Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 08:31:11 PM AEST
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Gosh, this is such a moving poem...
Really good work,
Emmy |
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Re: Her Soul Dimming
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by trinity_love500 on
Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 08:35:07 PM AEST
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A beautiful poem, and so so sad. :(
Trinity L |
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Re: Her Soul Dimming
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by Phildel on
Sunday, 13th October 2002 @ 07:54:28 AM AEST
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Thanks everyone for reading and commenting, this poem meant alot to me and I found writing it really helpful to how I've been feeling...
Thanks so much Ginsdance, the prayer is much appreciated!
Phildel xxx |
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Re: Her Soul Dimming
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by Phildel on
Wednesday, 16th October 2002 @ 10:47:48 AM AEST
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Thankyou Lia, the prayer is much appreciated...
:)
Phildel x x x |
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