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Alone
Contributed by
Al_obotomize
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Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 08:19:46 AM in AEST
Topic:
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alone once again
sitting in the dark
darkness surrounds me
without any friends
me, by myself
all alone once again
I do not see the point
of life nor death
if I'm just suffering
why follow this path
maybe in death
it'll be the same
me, by myself
all alone once again
i wish the day
of my death would rush
the day will come
when my blood will gush
out in the street
or on my bed
these beautiful thoughts
running through my head
me, by myself
all alone, in death
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2004-05-27 08:19:46]
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Re: Alone
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by OMEGA_ on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:18:33 AM AEST
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| i'm sorry to hear that but i think u really need help.. don't be sad this way look for ur self and beleive in your purity... |
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Re: Alone
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by MysticFireFairy on
Thursday, 27th May 2004 @ 09:30:28 AM AEST
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I love the way you express yourself through your words I write poems like that but not like you do.. I really love this poem and hope you keep writing this way because theres nothing wrong with writing dark poetry.
Great Job! |
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