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When I disappeared
Contributed by
chatabox
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Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 11:00:00 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A funny thing happened to me today,
I started washing myself away.
First my fingers then my palms
Then my wrist and then my arms.
Strange as it seems the water ran clear,
As I slowly watched myself disapear.
I looked in the mirror, nothing in view,
how long this would last, I hadnt a clue.
I didnt shout, I didnt scream,
although it was a frightening scene,
I began to have this evil thought
of what I could do and not get caught.
I went up the highschool, To classroom A1
To visit the teacher who sneers at my son,
I carefully unzipped his trousers right down,
It was his turn today to look like a clown.
As he reached to the blackboard his trousers did slip,
right over his waist and down from his hip.
Straight to the floor all the kids were amazed,
as he stood in his pants all embarassed and dazed.
With a smile and a wave, I hurried on out,
as the kids began laughing and starting to shout
I suddenly felt dizzy, all shaky and queer
as in horror I watched my hand reappear.
To be caught in the nude was something I feared,
but I managed to get home before I reappeared.
Will it happen again?, its all too weird
but I`ll never forget when I disappeared
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2002-10-11 11:00:00]
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Re: When I disappeared
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by ginsdance on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 11:48:31 AM AEST
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That's great Penny!! Thanks for the laugh... I can't wait to see what happens when you disappear the next time.
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Re: When I disappeared
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by aernby on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 12:25:04 PM AEST
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good stuff -- well written
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Re: When I disappeared
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 11th October 2002 @ 01:10:28 PM AEST
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LMAO!!! I may have done something similar....lol.... loved this...
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Re: When I disappeared
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by Lia on
Saturday, 12th October 2002 @ 09:42:52 AM AEST
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| LMAO!!! Boy this is just great!! |
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Re: When I disappeared
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by unpredictable on
Saturday, 26th October 2002 @ 08:54:10 AM AEST
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| *smile* i enjoyed, great write |
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Re: When I disappeared
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by KShink on
Tuesday, 12th November 2002 @ 07:09:26 AM AEST
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Hi Penny, it's Kassidi. I havent heard from you in a long time. This was a WONDERFUL poem like all the others. It's nice to see your poetry again!
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Re: When I disappeared
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by roisin on
Wednesday, 15th January 2003 @ 09:12:13 PM AEST
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Ohhh!!!! such fun...loved it...do please write more!!
rosie |
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